My fave part is the last stanza; love can mean freedom, but it also captures you. But, in a good situation, feels more like protecting arms, rather than a prison.
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Love and lust are wicked identicals often disguised to hide the dirty deeds of the other. This is definitely beautiful and the last stanza really rounds the poem out nicely. Definitely a fave of mine.
My fave part is the last stanza; love can mean freedom, but it also captures you. But, in a good situation, feels more like protecting arms, rather than a prison.
ReplyDeleteBtw, writer's cafe, is a site I joined; I didnt create it. You can also join by sending in your blog adress and theyll send you an invitation. writers@writeupcafe.com
Cool, thanks! I loved your short story!!!
ReplyDeleteLove and lust are wicked identicals often disguised to hide the dirty deeds of the other. This is definitely beautiful and the last stanza really rounds the poem out nicely. Definitely a fave of mine.
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