Your love runs through me...
Like an addiction...
Worse than any drug...
Withdrawals so dangerous...
Poisoning my veins...
Slowly...
Seeping...
Stealing...
Life's elixir...
Addiction so mesmerizing...
Reality becomes a blur...
Calculated domination in every action...
Feenin'...
Craving...
Requiring...
A dose...
Willing to stop at nothing...
Just to have the chance to inject you into my veins...
Addiction so strong...
This must be where I belong.
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ReplyDeleteNice read, but I'm afraid all the negativity takes away from the content somewhat. I know your the last person who would want to censor another...but in this circumstance, it may be prudent. I don't think you would want someone to throw ink on a beautiful new painting or put hot sauce in your cocoa, and thats kind of what I believe to be the case here. That said, if you remove their comments I would certainly understand the removal of this comment. It wouldn't make any sense.
ReplyDeleteAs for you Dark, I am asuming you know this author personally and possibly didn't get the affection or attention you thought you deserved. I am sorry for you in that regard. She has a natural magnetism and I can relate to your attraction. However, you may want to reconsider your tactics for gaining her concern. With this approach, I fear you are doomed to ineffectuality.
Beyond that, I would like to read some of your own work. You seem to be a very passionate individual and may have some hidden talent.
Thank you for taking time to read my comments. Have a great day.
Ydorj, I am afraid you are right... this does create a negative light on something i treasure and have immense passion for. I will no longer approve of this person's comments. This person is passionate about something.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your comment and hope that you were at least a little able to enjoy the writing! I am sorry!