Saturday, September 5, 2009

Battered Rains

Standing in the rain without my shelter…
Life’s woes keep on pelting…
One after the other…
Firing like an automatic rifle…
Testing my strength…
Testing your devotion…
Is all that we do for nothing?
Is there a greater meaning...
In words unspoken…
Than those that are broken?
Standing in the rain without my shelter...
Frigid in the night air...
Feelings of despair...
Have me hoping...
Begging...
Burning with anger...
Standing in the rain without my shelter...
Waiting for the sun to show...
Though, shall it stay hidden...
Please, please, please...
Find a way...
Take away my sorrow...
If not, then...
Take away my tomorrow...
Standing in the rain without my shelter...
There is no vital force binding me to this place.

3 comments:

  1. Very thought provoking and well written. By far, your very best work. I am sorry for your heartache. I am in love with your talent. Thank you for the great read....

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  2. Ydorj, Thank you! I am glad you like it. :) Don't be sorry, it will only make me a stronger person.

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  3. That must be your mother commenting, mothers always love thier children reguardless of thier faults!

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