Dancing along...
Fine lines...
Humanity or humility...
Directions incomplete...
Decisions at my feet...
Placing fate in distant beats...
Quarreling with distractions...
Each move drifting further...
Further into oblivion's void...
A master-mind of enthusiasm...
Charades dictated by parades...
Mistaken for masquerades...
I let his love control my every move...
Losing all my pieces...
For a shot at love's conquest.
THREE words
ReplyDeleteI feel you
Whenever I stopped your site, my mood is changing. Even I am mad, even lots of things makes me confuse in the day, even I don't understand every word in the poem(i wanna be honest, because english is my second language:)..i feel relax here. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWhen I first met with my hubby. I did it. I let his love control me, my every move. Those are unforgetble moments. I love your comments on my site. Btw, I don't know why I didn't say before but when you commented on my 'Theta mom Thursday' titled post on Oc,22th
Just like you understood inside of me more than me :)
Awesome words :)
ReplyDeleteGreat piece. I'm really glad that school is almost over, I'll then have the opportunity to read you more often:)
ReplyDeleteIt's great to write about love; I always had trouble doing so without sounding too corny. What you write is real, and everyone, I think, with a heart to feel can relate to it.